(Midnight series, #1)
By Dani Hart
My grandfather had once told me that life was an unpredictable beast—one moment calm with a full belly and heavy eyes, and the next, digging its paws in the dirt, snarling just before it took down its next victim. Until recently, I would argue with that notion, listing all the reasons why my life was as predictable as the tides coming and going. While I listened, I was young and never put much thought into a lot of the things my grandfather told me, but all that changed when the Hunters moved back to Sandpoint. More specifically, Wes Hunter. That was when the impossible became possible and the predictable became unpredictable.
As Abigail Rose looked down on her new world, she couldn’t deny the things she had seen and all the things she had learned. There were days she wished she could go back to her old life, but she had changed. Evolved. She was no longer a love-struck seventeen year old. She was a chosen leader and her path was undeniable. The black and white was fading to gray, and the only thing between mortals and immortals was her.
~5 out of 5 Stars~
I absolutely LOVED how this book was written. I would definitely say that the thing that stands out most to me, that kept me on the edge of my seat the most, was that the entire book was written from Abigail’s point of view. Sometimes, even in cases of alternating points of view, things are given away too much because you know what everyone is thinking, and often feel like you’re one step ahead as the reader. In this case, you are just as confused, scared, sad, happy, shocked, etc. as Abigail, at the same TIME as Abigail. Not only is the story an incredible ride itself, but it’s also an incredible emotional rollercoaster through a seventeen year old’s eyes.
I really want to give very little away about this book in this review, because the new discoveries practically every time you turned a page were what I loved about this book so much. I really try to figure out what will happen next when I read books, and am sometimes disappointed when I’m right. In the case of this book, if I guess an event, or what would happen to someone, it was more of a prayer that I was right – not that it was obvious.
There are several characters in this book that come into Abigail’s life, and some will have obvious effects on her, some will be characters you’re sure are bad/good/boring/important/etc, and I can assure you that 90% of the time you will be wrong. As she herself is told a few times, trust nothing and no one.
Down to the very last word of the very last page, you are shocked at every revelation. I love being kept on my toes with a book that has a very original story line and original characters. I most certainly found that in this book! I have to warn you there IS a sort of cliffhanger, but not a killer one…just one that really leaves you looking forward to what happens next. And I can’t wait until I find out!
“Did you get the soup?” Wes’ voice encircled me, catching my breath in my chest. He was only a foot away from me, his eyes glowing under the soft patio lights. Words escaped me, and my lungs ceased to function. Even my knees weakened. In seconds, I had transformed into a pathetic teenage girl hopelessly in love.
He dipped his head slowly, his eyes peering up, inviting me into his enchanting world, the upturn of his lips teasing me.
“I—How did you know?” A familiar comfort floated between us.
He took a step closer and sank his head in the space between my ear and my shoulder, grazing his lips back and forth, taking in a deep breath. Dizziness swirled around me, my mouth falling open as I took in labored breaths, my hands planted to the wall for support.
“I know everything about you, Abigail Rose,” he whispered into my ear as his lips traveled up my neck, his warm breath leaving a trail of goose bumps in its wake. “I know your favorite soup.” His nose explored my hair. “I know what shampoo you use.”
I was losing myself in him, the will to stay still collapsing.
He continued, “I know that you tie your hair up when you are uncomfortable.” One of his hands planted on the wall next to my head, the other glided through my hair, wrapping around locks and tugging lightly. A soft murmur escaped my mouth as his mouth explored my jawline. “I know what I feel when I’m around you.”
With that, my paralyzed limbs awoke and my fingers twisted in his hair. His hands cradled my face, pulling my lips to his.
“Wes.” A harsh demand reached us from the shadows, pulling us apart. Ben stepped into the light, glaring at his brother, his eyes vicious and his body rigid.
Wes turned to me, regret confronting me for just a moment before he left in the opposite direction of his older sibling. Ben focused his fury on me then, causing me to stumble back into the bistro.
Finishing my shift proved difficult, my thoughts racing between Wes’ confession and Ben’s obvious and inexplicable rage. My life was quickly spinning out of control, and I wasn’t in the driver’s seat anymore. I felt Mr. Hunter’s eyes on me as I grabbed my bag and ran out to my car where my dad was waiting. He hopped out, taking the passenger seat position. I was surprised when we arrived home. I was on autopilot these days.
“I think you’re ready for your test Monday. How do you feel?”
I killed the engine and looked down at the steering wheel, avoiding eye contact.
“Good,” I replied with a small smile. How could I concentrate on such mundane things when suddenly I was surrounded by chaos?
“I’m going to miss driving around with you,” he confessed and then jumped out of the Jeep. “You coming?”
“Yeah, in a minute.”
He looked at me oddly. “Okay.”
He shut the door and went inside. I flipped on my iPod playlist and leaned my seat back, closing my eyes, visions of Wes so close to me vividly replaying in my mind. Suddenly, an overwhelming sensation of being watched came over me.
I shot up quickly, startled by Wes standing outside the passenger door. Unforgiving tension passed between us as the seconds turned into minutes until time no longer existed. The storm that had rolled in during my shift had exchanged a light drizzle for an unexpected downpour, soaking Wes, who stood unfazed, studying me.
The click of the handle sent my heart racing for cover as he slid in, the water rolling off his body and settling into the leather. The cold followed him inside, but as I was reaching to turn the engine on, Wes placed his hand around mine, stopping me, the soft touch reminding me of so many times his hand had touched mine. I sucked in a shallow breath, closing my eyes as the water from his hand dripped onto mine. Only when he pulled it away did I look over, meeting his pained expression.
“What?” I asked quietly.
He twisted his hands tightly on his lap.
“My father told me to stay away from you, but I don’t know how to do this.” His knuckles turned white as he squeezed them tighter together.
“Do what?” My voice was shaky now.
He shook his head slowly. “Be around you without...” He lifted his head, untangling his hands, and leaned into me. His finger hooked under my chin, holding my gaze to his. I was under his spell once again, entranced by his beauty.
“Without what?” I asked breathlessly.
His eyes reached out and took hold of my soul, absolving pain’s past. Then without warning, he dropped his hand and sat back in his seat, securing his hands together once again.
Tears welled in my eyes, the familiar disappointment lingering. “You can’t keep doing this to me.” My words broke as I choked back humiliation.
“I know,” he said regretfully.
“Then, why?” I was begging for answers, pleading for closure before my broken heart was irreparable.
“Because I don’t know how to live without you either.” He gritted his teeth, the truth setting him free, but also defeating him.
“Then don’t,” I pleaded. “Don’t push me away, Wes. Please.” My heart ached.
His iridescent eyes faded, replaced with a terrifying darkness as he pushed my hair away from my neck and leaned into me.
“Your eyes,” my voice quaked.
“Are you afraid of me, Abby?” His voice was steady.
I shook my head slowly. “No,” I whispered.
He took my wrist roughly in his hand. “Are you afraid now?”
Tears rushed down my cheeks as I shook my head more quickly this time. “No.” I was holding onto the trust we had built over the years.
He pulled my face closer to him, his nose gliding over my swollen eyes and dampened cheeks.
“What about now?” he whispered.
“Never.” Why was he doing this to me? I felt completely decimated, and it was my fault because I was letting him break me.
His eyes lifted to mine, the onyx melting away to perfect iridescence again. Without warning, he jumped out of the Jeep into the storm and into the forest, his silhouette visible among the trees as lightning flashed across the forest.
I’m not the one you need to be afraid of.
I was stunned into disbelief. Believing in the unbelievable had shifted my sense of stability, forcing me to face all things out of the realm of possibility no longer trapped in the fantasy books of my childhood. The stories ran rampant around me no longer hidden in make believe. They were right in front of me all along. The veil had been lifted. Wes wasn’t like me. He wasn’t like anyone. He was something else entirely.
About The Author
I have always been drawn to words. They have this enchanting magic to touch my soul when I need it the most, whether through reading or writing. My love for writing started as most little girl's with a diary. It evolved into a big girl journal and then transformed into a notebook of poetry during the dark days of high school. I followed my dream to USC (University of Southern California) to study theatre, creative writing, and screenwriting. Finally, I understood how to take the stories in my head and commit them to paper. I was fortunate enough to sell my first professional script during college and have been writing ever since. In 2013 I took to self-publishing. I realized quickly that my passion resonated across many genres, so currently I have published young adult, fantasy, paranormal, dystopian, new adult, and women’s fiction. With both of my kids in school full-time now I am able to immerse myself in my passion more and when I’m not writing I’m enjoying the short time I have with my babies and my husband.
“I write what my heart sings.”
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